Day 30: Prompt minimalist poem
Window Stay
lost
one small pin
in a strong gust of wind
Benita H. Kape © 30.4.2019
Our final GloNaPoWriMo 2019 day. You will see there are two versions of the poem here. I prefer the first due to syntax. I messed for ages with the visual and not till later did I realise I’d missed two words. Whether I can reverse that picture above I’m not sure. I just go until I get it right. Cheers to all who have taken part. See you next year. But will continue to catch up on our April writings. ‘Til later.
A lovely millisecond captured in words!
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I prefer the first, too. It has a strong beat to it. It’s been great to share an April with you again. I hope the health stuff gets sorted out.
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